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Fixes/refreshes the existing distributed collectives documentation ladder
(docs/en/user/distributed/, docs/en/dev/distributed_ops.md,
examples/distributed/08_allreduce_mesh.py). No new tutorial content and no
new collective is added (all_to_all_v is intentionally out of scope —
RFC #2521's K3 lane is still unmerged).

Every claim below was independently verified against real source before
being fixed (not just trusted from an initial audit pass):

  • 19-reduce_scatter.md: removed a false claim (with a fabricated error
    string) that Max/Min/Prod are rejected. Only the HOST builtin rail
    is Sum-only (collective.cpp's CheckSupportedSumFp32BuiltinVariant); the
    InCore composite rail — the only one this tutorial's example exercises —
    supports the full ReduceOp family (tensor_ops.py docstring,
    collective.cpp's deducer, and the parametrized intrinsic test).
  • examples/distributed/08_allreduce_mesh.py: the docstring still
    claimed @pl.jit rejects a dynamic-shape signal window. That was fixed by
    42881d7 (issue @pl.jit cannot type a distributed window whose dim is pld.world_size(), blocking runtime-sized signal windows #2450) — pld.window(...) now synthesizes a DynDim
    instead of raising. Rewrote to match the paired doc's already-correct
    explanation.
  • docs/en/dev/distributed_ops.md: the canonical AllReduce dtype/op
    matrix claimed mesh, ring, and host-builtin all support the full
    ReduceOp family with FP16/FP32. In reality only host-builtin ring
    (mode="ring" → builtin.tensor.allreduce_ring) is restricted to
    Sum+FP32; InCore mesh, InCore ring, and host-builtin mesh support the
    full family. Mirrored the same fix into docs/zh/dev/distributed_ops.md,
    which carried the identical wrong claim.
  • 18-allgather.md: added the missing "reusing one window for source and
    result" pitfall + edge-case row that 20-all_to_all.md already has —
    collective.cpp marks it explicitly as "same constraint as all_to_all",
    so this was a real doc gap, not a style choice.
  • Smaller clarity fixes verified against source: 09-barrier.md now states
    the builtin barrier is self-clearing/reusable; 14-allreduce_two_phase.md
    now notes two-phase never becomes a mode= option; 15-allreduce_ring.md
    now covers the stage-in notify and the final-round no-notify guard
    (verified against 10_allreduce_ring.py); 20-all_to_all.md's IR-diff
    section is restructured to match its sibling docs' rhythm; a couple of
    unlinked "(step 16)" prose references became real links.

Test plan

  • pre-commit run (sim Docker image) on all 10 changed files: general
    hooks, check-docs-en-zh-parity, check-docs-nav,
    check-docs-symbol-coverage, check-op-docstring-parity,
    markdownlint-cli2, ruff, pyright — all pass.
  • Repo's code-review skill run against the diff — surfaced the
    docs/zh/dev/distributed_ops.md parity gap fixed above.
  • Docs-only change; no code/behavior change, so no test suite run beyond the
    above.

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Corrects three factual bugs verified against real source: reduce_scatter's
InCore composite actually accepts Max/Min/Prod (only the HOST builtin rail
is Sum-only, per collective.cpp's deducer); 08_allreduce_mesh.py's docstring
still claimed @pl.jit rejects a dynamic signal shape, a limitation fixed by
42881d7; and distributed_ops.md's canonical AllReduce dtype/op matrix
conflated host-builtin ring (Sum+FP32 only) with mesh/InCore-ring (full
ReduceOp family), contradicting the op's own docstring. Mirrors the last fix
into docs/zh/dev/distributed_ops.md, which carried the same wrong claim.

Also closes a real parity gap (allgather was missing the same
local_data/target aliasing pitfall all_to_all documents, despite
collective.cpp marking it "same constraint as all_to_all") and adds smaller
clarity fixes: barrier's reveal section now states the builtin is
self-clearing/reusable, two-phase allreduce now notes it never becomes a
mode= option, allreduce_ring's walkthrough now covers the stage-in notify
and the final-round no-notify guard, and all_to_all's IR-diff section is
restructured to match its sibling docs' rhythm.
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The changes update distributed-operation documentation and an example. They clarify reduction support by implementation path, barrier and ring signal behavior, collective staging and buffer requirements, and tutorial references.

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Reduction support and all-reduce examples
docs/en/dev/distributed_ops.md, docs/zh/dev/distributed_ops.md, docs/en/user/distributed/14-allreduce_two_phase.md, docs/en/user/distributed/19-reduce_scatter.md, examples/distributed/08_allreduce_mesh.py
The docs distinguish supported reductions by path and explain that two-phase is a teaching example, not a builtin mode. The example clarifies that @pl.jit can infer dynamic signal-row metadata.
Barrier reuse and ring signal flow
docs/en/user/distributed/09-barrier.md, docs/en/user/distributed/15-allreduce_ring.md, docs/en/user/distributed/17-broadcast.md
The walkthroughs describe builtin barrier reuse, ring signal initialization and the final skipped notification. The broadcast page links to the signal discussion.
Collective staging and buffer requirements
docs/en/user/distributed/18-allgather.md, docs/en/user/distributed/20-all_to_all.md
The walkthroughs explain staging in hand-rolled and builtin collectives, require distinct allgather source and target buffers, and clarify all-to-all transfer and barrier behavior.

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Estimated code review effort: 2 (Simple) | ~15 minutes

Change: Other

Merge Risk: 🔵 Low · up to c3667

The documentation may send readers to the wrong tutorial step or mislead them about broadcast synchronization. These are small, bounded corrections; the change is otherwise mergeable.

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  • observed — docs (service) was modified; 9 changed files map to changed impact.
  • observed — examples (service) was modified; 1 changed file maps to changed impact.

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  • observed — Modified behavior in docs/en/dev/distributed_ops.md: The documentation removes the claim that every mesh, ring, and host-builtin path supports FP16 and all four reduction operations. It specifies that host-builtin ring supports only Sum with FP32; InCore mesh, InCore ring, and host-builtin mesh support FP16 and FP32 with Sum, Max, Min, and Prod. It also clarifies that the stated host-builtin ring limitation applies to builtin.tensor.allreduce_ring.
  • observed — Modified behavior in docs/en/user/distributed/09-barrier.md: The walkthrough now documents that the builtin barrier is reusable across consecutive calls and loops because it is self-clearing, unlike the hand-rolled barrier’s single-use limitation.
  • observed — Modified behavior in docs/en/user/distributed/14-allreduce_two_phase.md: Adds a note that two-phase is not an all-reduce mode; the builtin selects "mesh" by default or "ring" in step 11. It describes this step as isolating chunked traffic from ring’s neighbour-local communication, with step 10 combining both ideas.
  • observed — Modified behavior in docs/en/user/distributed/15-allreduce_ring.md: Adds an explanation that reduce-scatter round 0 waits on signal row 0, which is initialized by a preceding stage-in phase that copies local chunks to scratch and notifies the right neighbour.
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In `@docs/en/user/distributed/14-allreduce_two_phase.md`:
- Line 31: Correct the step reference in the distributed all-reduce
documentation: update the mention of `step 11` in the builtin ring-selection
description to `step 10`, matching the step that combines chunked traffic with
neighbor-local communication.

In `@docs/en/user/distributed/15-allreduce_ring.md`:
- Around line 112-113: Replace the phrase “every hand-rolled collective in this
ladder” in the ring collective documentation with wording that limits the
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roughly half of mesh's traffic, at the price of a second barrier.

Two-phase never becomes a `mode=` option on `pld.tensor.allreduce` — the
builtin only ever picks `"mesh"` (default) or `"ring"` (step 11). This step

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🎯 Functional Correctness | 🟡 Minor | ⚡ Quick win

Correct the ring step number.

Line 33 says step 10 combines chunked traffic with neighbor-local communication, but this line labels ring as step 11. Change step 11 to step 10.

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In `@docs/en/user/distributed/14-allreduce_two_phase.md` at line 31, Correct the
step reference in the distributed all-reduce documentation: update the mention
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neighbour at row 0 — the same pattern every hand-rolled collective in this
ladder uses, just easy to miss when only the loop body is quoted.

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🎯 Functional Correctness | 🟡 Minor | ⚡ Quick win

Limit the stage-in claim to the ring collective.

The hand-rolled broadcast in docs/en/user/distributed/17-broadcast.md, Lines 64–77, stages data at the root and notifies and waits on every peer. It does not use the ring’s right-neighbour, row-0 notification pattern. Replace “every hand-rolled collective in this ladder” with wording specific to the ring implementation. (raw.githubusercontent.com)

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In `@docs/en/user/distributed/15-allreduce_ring.md` around lines 112 - 113,
Replace the phrase “every hand-rolled collective in this ladder” in the ring
collective documentation with wording that limits the right-neighbour, row-0
notification pattern to the ring implementation; leave the broadcast
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CodeRabbit review on PR hw-native-sys#2904 flagged that "the same pattern every
hand-rolled collective in this ladder uses" reads as claiming every
collective notifies a single neighbour, which is only true for ring —
broadcast/allgather/reduce_scatter/all_to_all all notify every peer.
Narrowed the claim to the stage-before-notify ordering, which is the part
that actually generalizes, and called out the neighbour-vs-every-peer
difference explicitly.
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Addressing the two CodeRabbit findings:

  1. 15-allreduce_ring.md:112-113 — fixed in 992d1e7. The wording was
    ambiguous enough to read as claiming every hand-rolled collective notifies
    a single neighbour, which is only true for ring (broadcast/allgather/
    reduce_scatter/all_to_all all notify every peer). Narrowed the claim to
    the stage-before-notify ordering, which is the part that actually
    generalizes, and called out the neighbour-vs-every-peer difference
    explicitly.

  2. 14-allreduce_two_phase.md:31 — not a bug, keeping as-is. The two
    "step" references in that paragraph are intentionally different and both
    correct: 16-allreduce_reveal.md states outright "this page is step 11"
    and is where mode="ring" is actually exposed as a real builtin option
    (verified: its own edge-case section validates mode="ring" signal
    shapes) — that's the "step 11" being pointed to. 15-allreduce_ring.md
    states "this page is step 10" and is where the two ideas (chunked
    traffic + neighbour-local sync) get combined by hand — that's the
    separate "step 10" reference two lines later. Verified against both
    docs' own "Suggested reading order" lines and 05-tutorials.md's
    16-step ladder before concluding this wasn't drift.

Also noting the "review" check failure on this PR is a CI infra flake
(ECONNRESET on the Codex-review artifact upload, not a content finding) —
should resolve on its own with this push.

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