docs(distributed): fix and refresh the existing collectives ladder - #2904
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Corrects three factual bugs verified against real source: reduce_scatter's InCore composite actually accepts Max/Min/Prod (only the HOST builtin rail is Sum-only, per collective.cpp's deducer); 08_allreduce_mesh.py's docstring still claimed @pl.jit rejects a dynamic signal shape, a limitation fixed by 42881d7; and distributed_ops.md's canonical AllReduce dtype/op matrix conflated host-builtin ring (Sum+FP32 only) with mesh/InCore-ring (full ReduceOp family), contradicting the op's own docstring. Mirrors the last fix into docs/zh/dev/distributed_ops.md, which carried the same wrong claim. Also closes a real parity gap (allgather was missing the same local_data/target aliasing pitfall all_to_all documents, despite collective.cpp marking it "same constraint as all_to_all") and adds smaller clarity fixes: barrier's reveal section now states the builtin is self-clearing/reusable, two-phase allreduce now notes it never becomes a mode= option, allreduce_ring's walkthrough now covers the stage-in notify and the final-round no-notify guard, and all_to_all's IR-diff section is restructured to match its sibling docs' rhythm.
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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe changes update distributed-operation documentation and an example. They clarify reduction support by implementation path, barrier and ring signal behavior, collective staging and buffer requirements, and tutorial references. ChangesDistributed Operations
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In `@docs/en/user/distributed/14-allreduce_two_phase.md`:
- Line 31: Correct the step reference in the distributed all-reduce
documentation: update the mention of `step 11` in the builtin ring-selection
description to `step 10`, matching the step that combines chunked traffic with
neighbor-local communication.
In `@docs/en/user/distributed/15-allreduce_ring.md`:
- Around line 112-113: Replace the phrase “every hand-rolled collective in this
ladder” in the ring collective documentation with wording that limits the
right-neighbour, row-0 notification pattern to the ring implementation; leave
the broadcast documentation and its description unchanged.
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| Two-phase never becomes a `mode=` option on `pld.tensor.allreduce` — the | ||
| builtin only ever picks `"mesh"` (default) or `"ring"` (step 11). This step |
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Correct the ring step number.
Line 33 says step 10 combines chunked traffic with neighbor-local communication, but this line labels ring as step 11. Change step 11 to step 10.
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In `@docs/en/user/distributed/14-allreduce_two_phase.md` at line 31, Correct the
step reference in the distributed all-reduce documentation: update the mention
of `step 11` in the builtin ring-selection description to `step 10`, matching
the step that combines chunked traffic with neighbor-local communication.
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| neighbour at row 0 — the same pattern every hand-rolled collective in this | ||
| ladder uses, just easy to miss when only the loop body is quoted. |
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Limit the stage-in claim to the ring collective.
The hand-rolled broadcast in docs/en/user/distributed/17-broadcast.md, Lines 64–77, stages data at the root and notifies and waits on every peer. It does not use the ring’s right-neighbour, row-0 notification pattern. Replace “every hand-rolled collective in this ladder” with wording specific to the ring implementation. (raw.githubusercontent.com)
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In `@docs/en/user/distributed/15-allreduce_ring.md` around lines 112 - 113,
Replace the phrase “every hand-rolled collective in this ladder” in the ring
collective documentation with wording that limits the right-neighbour, row-0
notification pattern to the ring implementation; leave the broadcast
documentation and its description unchanged.
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CodeRabbit review on PR hw-native-sys#2904 flagged that "the same pattern every hand-rolled collective in this ladder uses" reads as claiming every collective notifies a single neighbour, which is only true for ring — broadcast/allgather/reduce_scatter/all_to_all all notify every peer. Narrowed the claim to the stage-before-notify ordering, which is the part that actually generalizes, and called out the neighbour-vs-every-peer difference explicitly.
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Summary
Fixes/refreshes the existing distributed collectives documentation ladder
(
docs/en/user/distributed/,docs/en/dev/distributed_ops.md,examples/distributed/08_allreduce_mesh.py). No new tutorial content and nonew collective is added (
all_to_all_vis intentionally out of scope —RFC #2521's K3 lane is still unmerged).
Every claim below was independently verified against real source before
being fixed (not just trusted from an initial audit pass):
19-reduce_scatter.md: removed a false claim (with a fabricated errorstring) that
Max/Min/Prodare rejected. Only the HOST builtin railis Sum-only (
collective.cpp'sCheckSupportedSumFp32BuiltinVariant); theInCore composite rail — the only one this tutorial's example exercises —
supports the full
ReduceOpfamily (tensor_ops.pydocstring,collective.cpp's deducer, and the parametrized intrinsic test).examples/distributed/08_allreduce_mesh.py: the docstring stillclaimed
@pl.jitrejects a dynamic-shape signal window. That was fixed by42881d7 (issue @pl.jit cannot type a distributed window whose dim is pld.world_size(), blocking runtime-sized signal windows #2450) —
pld.window(...)now synthesizes aDynDiminstead of raising. Rewrote to match the paired doc's already-correct
explanation.
docs/en/dev/distributed_ops.md: the canonical AllReduce dtype/opmatrix claimed mesh, ring, and host-builtin all support the full
ReduceOpfamily with FP16/FP32. In reality only host-builtin ring(
mode="ring"→builtin.tensor.allreduce_ring) is restricted toSum+FP32; InCore mesh, InCore ring, and host-builtin mesh support thefull family. Mirrored the same fix into
docs/zh/dev/distributed_ops.md,which carried the identical wrong claim.
18-allgather.md: added the missing "reusing one window for source andresult" pitfall + edge-case row that
20-all_to_all.mdalready has —collective.cppmarks it explicitly as "same constraint as all_to_all",so this was a real doc gap, not a style choice.
09-barrier.mdnow statesthe builtin barrier is self-clearing/reusable;
14-allreduce_two_phase.mdnow notes two-phase never becomes a
mode=option;15-allreduce_ring.mdnow covers the stage-in notify and the final-round no-notify guard
(verified against
10_allreduce_ring.py);20-all_to_all.md's IR-diffsection is restructured to match its sibling docs' rhythm; a couple of
unlinked "(step 16)" prose references became real links.
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